A story for the event
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A story for the event
by T.O.R.N.A.D.O 23rd December 2012, 3:40 pm
Guys this is the story entry through which I entered the story making event inside Fire Country of NTSD... The reward for best story is Yondaime rank. So guys tell me can I win this?
Itachi.Byakuya wrote:~BUMP Finally my story. I have created a character called Fubuki Atsuya.
A brief description about him - He is a Sharingan user and works under Orochimaru. Rest all you will know when you complete the story.
So here it is:
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......: Head back Shiranami! I will handle this Sound Ninja…
Fire Style: Phoenix Flare Jutsu!!
Sound Ninja: You are too weak. And you are at disadvantage here because am a Water Style user. I will kill you Konoha brats with my attack.
Water Style: Exploding Water Colliding Wave!!
Due to this attack, the platform breaks and the Konoha Ninjas along with the Sound Ninja fall. And the Konoha Jounin is injured fatally…
…….: Shiranami, are you okay?
Shiranami: Yeah… But you are injured fatally…
Sound Ninja: Are you so confident that you are showing your back at me? Am gonna kill you!
Sound Ninja runs towards Shiranami with Kunai in his hands. But before he could hit him, the other Jounin comes in between and Kunai pierces through him.
Shiranami: (Crying) Why? Why did you save me?
….…: Because you are my comrade. Run away now, I sense that I have very less time. So run away as quickly as you can. I will handle this guy for you to get away.
Shiranami: NO!! I won’t leave you alone!
………: Idiot! Run away! Am ordering you!
Shiranami: (Running) Why am I so weak? How will I become stronger?…
Then a sound echoed.
Sound: You want to become stronger? Then open the door in front of you.
Shiranami runs and opens the door.
Sound: You see that crystal? Break it and I will give you power.
Due to the greediness, Shiranami breaks the crystal. After breaking it, a huge monster emerged from the crystal. Then the monster came to Shiranami and others and came near them.
Sound Ninja: (Looking at the Monster) What the hell did you do, you brat? (Then started running)
Shiranami: (Following him) How dare you kill my comrade?
Monster then started to absorb their chakra.
Sound Ninja: What’s happening to me? Why am I feeling so weak? NO!! This can’t be! That monster is absorbing my chakra! NO!!
Shiranami: I guess we both will die here.
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Hokage: What happened to the troops which I sent to eliminate Sound ninja?
Shizune: They haven’t returned yet. Shall I send some investigation troops to investigate?
Hokage: Yes send them.
Naruto and Kakashi were eating ramen at Ichiraku.
Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei, will you pay for me?
Kakashi: Sure, but this will be for the last time.
Naruto: Arigatou, Sensei. Sensei, do you know what Sakura-Chan is doing?
Kakashi: She was doing her medical training. Let’s go and get her and train.
Meanwhile at the Office
Hokage: Shizune! What happened to those investigation troops? Why haven’t they returned yet?
Shizune: Don’t know ma’am. I think we should send Team – 10 to investigate.
Hokage: Call Asuma! I will send him with his team.
Asuma Sarutobi is brought to the office.
Asuma: Ohayo Tsunade-Sama. Why am I summoned here?
Hokage: I am sending you and your team on an investigation mission. Past these days, the troops I am sending for missions are getting disappeared.
Asuma: I am honoured. Me and my team will depart by tomorrow.
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Orochimaru: Kabuto, summon Sasuke here.
Kabuto: As you wish, Orochimaru-Sama.
Kabuto comes with Sasuke to Orochimaru.
Orochimaru: Sasuke , am telling you a secret. *Secret*…………………………………………. *Secret*. So Sasuke, go and get me that crystal which is hidden inside the forest beside Konoha and bring it to me, so that I can proceed with the plan.
Sasuke: Okay I will. (Facing towards the door and whispering) You will regret for telling me that secret Orochimaru. (Then he goes away.)
After 5 minutes, Sasuke comes back.
Orochimaru: What the hell are you doing here Sasuke? I sent you on a mission I guess. Hurry up and go!!
Sasuke: You fool! The one whom you sent to the mission wasn’t me. It was that idiot Atsuya who transformed like me and went. In addition to that he is a Sharingan user as well and he has copied all of my techniques.
Orochimaru: Oh sh*t! I told him a very important secret. Sasuke go and follow him.
Sasuke then goes away.
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Pein: Konan, ask Itachi and Kisame to meet me.
Konan: Okay I will tell them.
Konan brings Itachi and Kisame to Pein.
Pein: Itachi, I want you and Kisame to go on a mission. There is a crystal hidden in the forest beside Konoha. Orochimaru was saying something about it to Kabuto. He told that a beast is sealed inside that crystal which can be used to fasten the process of activating the Juubi. Go and get that crystal, and if the seal is broken already then kill that beast. We can’t afford it to get in anyone else’s hand.
Itachi: Okay I got that. Kisame, let’s go.
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The next day.
Asuma: Ready Shikamaru, Ino and Chouji?
Shikamaru: I would have been sleeping this time. What a drag…
Ino: Wow! A mission after a very long time.
Chouji: Asuma-Sensei, Give us a treat after the completion of the mission.
So now Team – 10 is ready to depart for the mission. They move forward to the forest.
Ino: Shikamaru, what do you think about this mission?
Shikamaru: I don’t know but Asuma told me that it is an investigation mission.
Asuma: Yes, Hokage-Sama told me that in past few days the Ninja troops sent on mission are getting disappeared.
Chouji: I am looking forward to this mission. Hopefully there is no fight during the mission.
A sound came. It echoed throughout the forest.
Chouji: What was that?
Shikamaru: (Turning left) It came from that way.
Asuma: Let’s go and see what is there.
When they reached, they saw a huge monster yelling.
Asuma: Get ready you three.
Wind Style: Drilling Air Bullet!!
Shikamaru: What a drag. Now we have to fight this huge monster.
Shadow Membrane Jutsu!!
Chouji: Okay let’s fight.
Butterfly Bullet Bombing Jutsu!!
Even with this combined Jutsus, the monster wasn’t affected. It could divide itself just like Pein’s dogs which he summons. Then the monster starts to absorb chakra from those 3. Meanwhile, Ino summons a pigeon and writes to Hokage about the monster.
Asuma: (Shouting) Watch out Ino!! The monster is coming behind you!!
Ino: Oh no! I don’t have much time left!
Shikamaru: Shadow Neck Binding Jutsu!! Ino, I can’t hold him for long. Write quickly and send it. It is getting out of hand! sh*t!
……………: CHIDORI!!!!
Ino-Shika-Cho: Sasuke!?!
Ino: (Blushing) Wow! Sasuke-Kun is here to save us.
Sasuke: Don’t get the wrong idea. Am not here to save you. And you Konoha brats broke the seal, you idiots. Anyway this can be my good training to defeat Itachi.
Ino sent the letter to Hokage describing the beast and asking for reinforcements.
Sasuke: Lightning Style: Chidori Senbon!!
Asuma: Let’s help Sasuke.
Wind Style: Wind Cutter Jutsu!!
Shikamaru: Got it!
Shadow Sewing Technique!!
Chouji: Partial Multi-Size Technique!!
Ino: It’s no use. That beast is absorbing our chakra and is growing size by size.
……….: Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!!
Asuma: Who was that? (Shocked) Sasuke? (Looking beside) Then who is this guy?
Shikamaru: How is it possible? How are there two Sasukes?
Sasuke: So you reached here, Atsuya. I underestimated you a bit. But now you will face the consequences.
Atsuya: (Transforming back) Oh! So you found out huh… Sasuke, you can’t defeat me. I know all of your attacks and attacking pattern.
Sasuke: I won’t be fighting you now. I am here to do my job i.e. to take you and the beast to Orochimaru. (Something is fishy!) What? How did the monster come out? It was supposed to be sealed. So you along with the Konoha brats broke the seal?
Atsuya: No, it was already broken when I reached here.
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The letter sent by Ino reaches Hokage’s office.
Hokage: (Shouting) Shizune!! Call Kakashi NOW!!
Shizune: Yes ma’am!
Shizune comes back with Kakashi within a minute.
Kakashi: Why did you call me here, Tsunade-sama?
Hokage: I am sending you and your Team – 7 as reinforcements to Team – 10. Get ready and depart now!
Kakashi: As you wish Tsunade-sama.
Kakashi goes to his team at training ground.
Naruto: Where did you go Kakashi-sensei?
Kakashi: Call Sai, and get ready you two. We are departing for a mission now.
Sakura: Now? What is so urgent?
Kakashi: Team – 10 is in trouble, we have to back them up. I will be meeting you at the Konoha gate. Reach there ASAP.
Both: Understood!
Team – 7 along with Sai reach the gate in 10 minutes. Kakashi was already there.
Kakashi: So are you guys ready?
Team – 7: Yes!
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Sasuke: Atsuya, let’s take this beast to Orochimaru quickly.
Atsuya: Why should I listen to your orders? I am free, I will do whatever I want.
Asuma: Stop fighting you both! First find out a way to suppress this beast!
Shikamaru: Let me think of a plan.
Chouji: I will buy us some time for you to come up with a plan.
Spiked Human Bullet Tank Technique!!
Asuma: Wind Release: Dust Cloud Technique!!
This will buy you some time, Shikamaru..
Sasuke: I guess I will fight it…. I have to surpass Itachi no matter what. To test my skills I need to fight him.
Atsuya: Then do so and leave me free. I will fight it too.
Fire Style: Flame Bullet Technique!!
Sasuke: Another of my Jutsu? You Bastard!! How many jutsus have you copied?
Atsuya: All of them... Including Kirin!!
Sasuke: You Bastard! What did you say? I haven’t used it till now then how the hell you copied?
Atsuya: You know who I am? If not then I won’t bother telling it to you.
Ino: Look out both of you! It is going to step on you!!
Sasuke: You better care about yourself. Lightning Style: Chidori Nagashi!!
Atsuya: It’s no use. He is absorbing your chakra.
Asuma: Shikamaru, did you come up with a plan?
Shikamaru: No… I don’t understand what kind of beast is this. He grows bigger by absorbing chakra. If it continuously absorbs chakra then how will we fight it?
Ino: Look out Shikamaru!!
Shikamaru: (Turning back) sh*t! I don’t have much time..
……….: Lightning Release: Lightning Blade!!
Asuma: Kakashi!!
Ino: So the reinforcements have arrived!! Thank god!
Naruto: What is Sasuke doing here? And who is this guy?
Kakashi: So you are here too, Fubuki Atsuya!
Sakura: Sensei, you know this guy?
Kakashi: Yes… He is the greatest Copy Ninja in the World… He can copy those jutsus which haven’t been used by the user yet… In other words, He can read people’s minds… I have read about him in the book but now I see him for real.
Sasuke: So that’s how that bastard copied my Kirin…
Sakura: What is he here for?
Kakashi: I heard that he was working for Orochimaru along with Sasuke… Maybe they are here to take the beast…
Atsuya: So am this famous is it? But you are little wrong here… Am not here to take the beast but am here to KILL it!
Sasuke: What did you say? You can’t betray Orochimaru so early, do you?
Atsuya: Yes but I won’t disclose your secret. I know that soon you were going to kill Orochimaru and absorb his power…
Kakashi: No wonder he can read people’s minds… We are not here for chit-chat… Let’s take down that beast.
Naruto: (Grinning) This fight will be enjoyable I guess…
Sakura: Don’t underestimate this beast Naruto… It beat Team – 10 just like that. Anyway Ino, did you have any information about this beast?
Ino: Not much but it grows bigger when it absorbs chakra.
Kakashi: Sakura and Ino, heal the injured ones… I am gonna become serious now… (Opening his Sharingan eye)
Asuma: Let’s do it Kakashi!!
Kakashi: I will be using my Kamui on it. Let’s see how it will dodge it.
Asuma: I will try to make him busy, use your Kamui at that time…
Wind Release: Great Slashing Tornado!!
Sasuke: Fire Style: Great Fireball Jutsu!!
Asuma: Good Sasuke, it will increase the amount of damage.
Kakashi: Kamui!!
A part of the beast was cut off and transferred to next dimension.
Kakashi: No use. It’s too big…
Shikamaru: So it can divide itself also…
Naruto: Let me try using Rasenshuriken.
Kakashi: What have I told you? Tsunade-sama told that never allow you to use that technique again. Did you forget what happened to you when you used it on Kakuzu?
Naruto: Geez! But there isn’t any other way to defeat this guy.
Beast was now agitated as his a part of his cut off. So it became insane and started to attack everywhere destroying the forest. Meanwhile, Sasuke tries to attack the beast from behind.
Sasuke: Lightning Style: Chidori Stream!!
But F*** the beast punched him away and now Sasuke is in grave danger! Beast is going to step on him!
All: NO!!!!!
………: Amaterasu!!
Black flames covered up beast’s leg and, beast divided itself again to prevent the further burn.
Sasuke: Itachi? (Talking to himself) Why the hell was I saved by that person?
Naruto: What the hell is Akatsuki doing here?
Kisame: Hey Itachi, don’t overdo it. And answer to the question why we are here is……. TO KILL THAT BEAST!!
Naruto: Aaaand How are you planning to do that?
Kisame: Just wait and watch.
Kisame loaded his Samehada and went head on towards the beast. Since Samehada can absorb opponent’s chakra, he was able to hold up.
Naruto: Akatsuki really is powerful.
Kakashi: Don’t amuse yourself. Help him Naruto!
Naruto: Okay, Tajuu Kagebunshin no Jutsu!!
Many shadow clones of Naruto were created and all of them except two went to fight that beast. Naruto along with his one clone were forming Rasengan.
Naruto: Secret Technique: Rasengan!!
This deflected the beast a little bit. Kisame was angry on Naruto that why he was helping him.
Kisame: I don’t need your help brat!
Atsuya: You alone can’t handle it, stupid!
Kisame: Who is this?
Itachi: Fubuki Atsuya, the greatest copy ninja in the shinobi world.
Atsuya: I see you are well informed too, Itachi.
Sasuke: (Not listening to convo and thinking) Shall I use Kirin? (Looking at Itachi) NO! Not now. I created that jutsu exclusively to kill Itachi!
Kisame: Anyway leave it, am gonna bring this beast down once and for all!
Asuma: Let’s help him Team – 10, Team – 7!
Kisame: I guess there is no helping it, okay if you guys get in my way, I will kill you.
All the teams fought very hard against that beast but eventually everyone was knocked out.
Atsuya: It’s time.
Naruto: Now what you idiot?
Atsuya: I know its secret and have figured out its weakness.
Naruto: Spit it out!
Atsuya: This beast named Arrogante, originally created by Orochimaru didn’t have any control on it. It kept on becoming mad whenever summoned. So to ensure his safety, Orochimaru sealed that beast in a Crystal Ball and hid it in the forest beside Konoha, i.e. here. His purpose of creating was that with it, he could absorb various natures of chakra and hence create various new jutsus. Now since he knows how to control it, he wants it back. I was working under him because of this. I wanted to know this secret. Orochimaru told me this by mistake and I won’t let Orochimaru succeed so I am going to kill that beast!
Naruto: Over with the philosophy class? Now can you tell its weakness (Shrewdly) Please?
Atsuya: Now you know of my abilities. In addition to humans I also can read minds of beasts. I did the same thing to it. I read its mind and came to know that it CANNOT attack while absorbing chakra and CANNOT absorb chakra while attacking. And it prefers absorbing rather than attacking. So we can use this weakness as our advantage.
Naruto: So how are we gonna defeat him?
Atsuya: For that to be reached, I need help of you, Itachi and Kakashi. I know about your Rasenshuriken. It contains a large amount of chakra. You will use it on him, so that he tries to absorb its chakra. Then I need Itachi to use his Amaterasu and Kakashi to use his Kamui.
Naruto: (Looking at Kakashi) Sorry, but I can’t use that jutsu.
Kakashi: It’s okay Naruto, I will let you use this jutsu last time.
Naruto: Yosh! Atsuya so shall we start the plan?
Atsuya: Itachi, do you agree with me?
Itachi: We don’t have any other choice. So let’s do it.
Atsuya: All the people present here, Use all your powerful jutsus on that beast and let it absorb your chakra. We will use that as a diversion and kill this beast as planned.
Asuma: Okay! Wind Release: Great Slashing Tornado!!
Chouji: Secret Technique: Super Human Spiked Bullet Tank!!
Sasuke: Fire Release: Great Fire Dragon Technique!!
Shikamaru: I will bind him. Shadow Network Binding Technique!!
Atsuya: Lightning Release: Chidori Multisized Stream Jutsu!!
Kisame: Water Release: Demon Fish Wave Crash!!
Naruto: And finally, Wind Release: Rasenshuriken!!
Kakashi: Itachi it’s our turn now!
Itachi: Yes I know that.
With all those techniques, beast was absorbing the chakra. Now Kakashi and Itachi straining themselves used,
Kakashi: Kamui! I will cut his parts and you perish them Itachi!
Itachi: Okay, Amaterasu!
This cycle was repeated and the beast was killed. Everyone raised Atsuya for his final moment plan (Like everyone did to Naruto when he defeated Pein).
Kakashi: It worked! Atsuya you saved us.
Naruto: Thanks Atsuya, I see that you were not a bad guy after all.
Itachi: Kisame, Let’s go. We have accomplished our mission. (To Sasuke) Reach the spot in time.
Sasuke: Yes obviously, I will kill you there.
Kakashi: Sakuea and Ino heal us all.
After that everyone except Atsuya went to their respective places, Team – 7, Team - 10 went back to Konoha, Sasuke went back to Orochimaru and Itachi & Kisame went to Akatsuki hideout.
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At Orochimaru’s hideout, Sasuke told him what Atsuya planned and did.
Orochimaru: Damn that traitor! He was here just to know that secret! I waited for this time for 2 long years! Anyway I will plan something else.
Sasuke: Am going outside to train. Don’t call me back for some days.
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Meanwhile at Konoha, Kakashi told everything to Tsunade.
Hokage: So Atsuya was also there and he was the main root of your victory.
Kakashi: Yes, because of his master plan we were able to defeat that beast.
After this beast incident, no one knows what happened to Fubuki Atsuya. Everyone last saw him at the place of incident. But I am telling you this secret and don’t share it with anyone. Fubuki Atsuya has gone to the world from where he came i.e. The Earth where you all live. Now you guys maybe thinking that how I know this? The answer is……….. I AM Fubuki Atsuya.
THE END.
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Re: A story for the event
by T.O.R.N.A.D.O 24th December 2012, 10:36 am
Thanks but no1 except you read it. 
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Re: A story for the event
by EclipX3 24th December 2012, 2:51 pm
i dont know fire country had make competition...
who take part in this competition???
anyway hope you can win..
who take part in this competition???
anyway hope you can win..
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Re: A story for the event
by T.O.R.N.A.D.O 24th December 2012, 3:45 pm
Many took part anyway I completed your animation. See it.
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Re: A story for the event
by A-MAN 24th December 2012, 4:34 pm
Lol, nice ending Atsuya! I guess you can win this. Good luck!!!
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