Pirate King signature

Well, every other forum makes new threads for every new signature created, so...Ima do that.
Here's a Luffy signature, with the strong world outfit

Soo yeah, I got a bunch of suggestions already, but feel free to add more
~Yin

background:awesome.
text:awesome.
render:not too awesome.
so....a 9/10 (i feel like a gfxer )

i like it! great job!

render little bit bright,"The Pirate" text didn't fit (BG and Render),"KING" text doesn't look really good,BG look good but flow look messy (stringy),render didn't blend well,no lighting,no depth. Overall rate 6.5/10 (learn how to choose a good appearance render =_= )

Congratulations Yin! DRAOX HAS JUST GAVE YOU A MORE THAN 6!!
I really loved it! +1 for yah!

@A-Man & Rhino
Thank you guys!!
@Draox
No lighting?? I think you mean "No lightsource, because there's lighting, but it's unclear from where its coming from. Also, the bg was supposed to be "stringy" or sharp But thanks anyways, I finally got above a 6!!
@Awsan
why be descriptive when you can be a gfxer that rates everything either NOT-Awesome or Awesome
@pragashiken
Interesting sig, but please but that in a new thread..

i didnt like this one that much because of the effects. some patches look good while some look weird. plus its only red and black.